User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-26975268-20130412023629

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-26975268-20130412023629 Here's me attempting to carry out your suggestions.



I don't really think the celery is any clearer than it was...