User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-26975268-20130317233142

CzechOut wrote: Look, SOTO, I'll give you my specific critique on this one, but I don't want to have to keep doing this. If I say we're still looking for 11 that means that previous designs have been rejected.

This drawing has way too much blank face it and the implication of your shoulder line is that face of Smith is sitting on the body of Orson Welles — in his later years. You've blown the proportions completely, and turned a thin man corpulent, in my opinion. That is not a challenge to correct it. I don't like it at all anyway. The bow tie concept is nearly there. Okay. I won't ask you again — I was just surprised you disliked that one. And I took it directly from a photo, although your Welles analogy is quite amusing. I'll have a go at your suggestions on the bow tie tomorrow (or in a few hours, depending on when I can find the time)