User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-6433721-20130309211246/@comment-26975268-20130309212257

Well, generally, instead of editing an article pre-discussion, you should put the revised article as a subpage of your user page. These are often referred to as "mock-ups," as they just demonstrate your suggestion, but don't affect the real articles.

Basically, you'd create a new page at User:ComicBookGoddess/Target Books (1974) and put what you think Target Books (1974) should look like there.

As far as your actual question, I'll take a look at the linked pages later.