User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-4028641-20130309205157

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-4028641-20130309205157 SmallerOnTheOutside wrote:
 * 1) Once again, jelly babies not clear. I'll refer you to my comment upthread on your last draft. I'd recommend getting rid of it.
 * 2) You're starting to get the idea as far as the scarf. I would do a little less wibbly (ie. more straight), but aside from that, it's very good.

The Jelly Babies aren't really the focus, and furthermore I think most people familiar with the Baker era would recognize that's what they were, particularly after seeing the scarf.

The reason it's so wobbily is that I based it off a real picture. I update change it later.