Talk:Mary's Story (audio story)

Please improve the plot
I couldn't stand there being no plot anymore. So I wrote something that is not entirely a plot but rather a short synapsis. My problem is that I can't afford to spend enough time to do the plot properly. So I wrote it from memory, meaning that things can be a little out of order or, god forbid, even slightly incorrect. However, the main gist is there, and I think it's better to have something than to have nothing.

Still, if anyone has time and desire to improve on this, especially if inaccuracies are found, please be my guests. Amorkuz ☎  20:10, May 31, 2016 (UTC)