User:SOTO/Forum Archive/Help!/@comment-4139960-20130708231515/@comment-26975268-20130710232029

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/Help!/@comment-4139960-20130708231515/@comment-26975268-20130710232029 Well, your sentence does make it much more clear what the topic of the article is, and actually gives information. I guess I'll start writing my leads more like that from now on. Thanks for bringing that to my attention.