Talk:The Phoenix in the Tardis (feature)

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Isn't "However, a few passages seemed to describe another man altogether — such as when he was described as being "just as irritable and touchy as the First Doctor". " a bit opinonated to come in the text of an article like this? as a wiki, things should be worder neutrally. we can't tell people what is and isn't good or correct writing, regardless of personal agreement with interpertation. I suggest changing this to something like "though certain passages seem less grounded in the depiction of the character", or "seem farfetched" or something more professional souunding like that.


 * The whole article needs a rewrite, given it is written more like an essay than an actual source article. If I remember correctly, it is actually fiction, not non-fiction like the article claims. 20:43, 22 July 2023 (UTC)