User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-188432-20130401052420

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-188432-20130401052420 SmallerOnTheOutside wrote: Okay, so this is SOTO's earlier effort that was rejected. At this point, we need to crack on. So this kind of pose, but I think OS25's lines on the coat are better and crisper. So, OS, take the design you have and try to put it into this sort of position—maybe slightly closer in. And then give us a much clearer stick of celery.