User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-27280472-20161218234727/@comment-1432718-20161219025904

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-27280472-20161218234727/@comment-1432718-20161219025904 I made a couple of minor edits, but otherwise it looks good. However, I wish I didn't read the publisher's summary, because it sounds like it would be a good story.