Talk:The Silver Turk (audio story)

Plot
I have filled in one quarter of the plot. This is my first attempt at plot rendition, so there must be mistakes. I also strongly suspect that this is way longer than necessary. I did try to only mention things relevant to one of the multiple plot threads, but it is an intricate story.

I would appreciate any corrections/improvements from more experienced users to guide me in preparing the plots for Parts 2-4 in the future. Amorkuz Johan Drossel


 * UPD. The plot is complete but I will continue tinkering with it because I think it's far from being perfect. Any collaboration is welcome. Amorkuz ☎  11:26, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

Is Johan Drossel a puppet?
I have made an error in understanding this detail of the plot: is Drossel we see in the story himself a puppet? Since my error was based on a quote from the story, I imagine I might not be the first or the last. I record my final ruling on the matter here (no further changes are required at the moment.

At the end of the story, when Drossel drops motionless to the floor, having killed Gramm, Mary says: "He was a puppet too. Drossel was a puppet." Based on these words I naturally concluded that he was a puppet, created a separate page for Puppet Johan Drossel (scheduled for demolition) and edited accordingly. Him being a puppet also explained how he took two bullets to the chest from Stahlbaum without being harmed and even without bleeding. And the Doctor seems to confirm this saying: "He created himself in his own image."

However, as the Doctor is destroying all the puppets, he discovers that Drossel was a human augmented with Cyber technology rather than a puppet created using it. The Doctor describes it this way: "I stripped his body of the Cyber inlays that kept him alive. Not a pleasant task. The police can puzzle over the rest." My final conclusion is that there was only one individual looking like Johan Drossel, originally human, later partially Cyber converted. As seen from the example of the Brigadier, even a complete Cyber conversion does not warrant a separate page.

I do not know if human is the best species description for Drossel who is Cyber augmented for the whole of the story though. Amorkuz ☎  11:26, December 31, 2015 (UTC)