User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130129081336/@comment-4189499-20130327082659

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130129081336/@comment-4189499-20130327082659 Looks good to me so far. Just looking from a layout perspective, I think it's divided up well. New readers will easily be able to understand where to edit, and it would be easy to split the article up again if need be.