User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-26975268-20130308032322

OttselSpy25 wrote: There, I updated it to multiple user's suggestions.

I like it, but still very one-dimensional. To elaborate: try making the scarf twist into a new angle immediately after the T so that it can sit facing the top (and not us) on top of the R. Also, let the part around S hang loose a little, and then fold back. While you're at it, try using some actual solid blue (ie. the background) in there too. Don't worry about it blending in - it'll look cool.