Talk:William Abberton

Question
I have been editing this page, but find myself baffled by this passage:


 * Nimrod encountered the Doctor again in late 2004, while aggressively acquiring a Huldran spacecraft, he also initiated Project Lazarus: an attempt to replicate his regenerations.

This looks like at least two sentences stuck together with commas, I have no idea how someone acquires something "aggressively" and while I am fairly confident the last pronoun refers to the Doctor, the superfluitie of "he" and "his" is poorly phrased. I hesitate to take this sentence apart for fear I could destroy its meaning. Will someone who is familiar with the relevant work -- presumably Project Lazarus do something to fix this sentence, if only to send me a note at boblipton@nyc.rr.com to explain its sense?

Bob

Not a valid source
I removed the following from the article:


 * The Forge's beta facility was bought online soon after by Nimrod and he was the only known senior officer left alive. Torchwood Three knew that Nimrod was still running the Forge through 2009. (REF: The Torchwood Archives)

The Torchwood Archives is not a valid source for in universe articles, as its page states clearly at the top. Shambala108 ☎  03:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)