User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-188432-20130304024346/@comment-188432-20130317204930

Look, SOTO, I'll give you my specific critique on this one, but I don't want to have to keep doing this. If I say we're still looking for 11 that means that previous designs have been rejected.

This drawing has way too much blank face it and the implication of your shoulder line is that face of Smith is sitting on the body of Orson Welles — in his later years. You've blown the proportions completely, and turned a thin man corpulent, in my opinion. That is not a challenge to correct it. I don't like it at all anyway. The bow tie concept is nearly there.