User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-7302713-20130519053621/@comment-7302713-20130519053811

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-7302713-20130519053621/@comment-7302713-20130519053811 Here are two examples of paras written both ways.

From coffee: in-line format
 * Coffee was often served with milk and sugar. The Ninth Doctor took his coffee with milk but no sugar. (TV: Rose) Coffee was often served with breakfast. (TV: The Sea Devils) Amy Pond once drank coffee for breakfast. (PROSE: The Coming of the Terraphiles)

From coffee: ref format
 * Coffee was often served with milk and sugar. The Ninth Doctor took his coffee with milk but no sugar. Coffee was often served with breakfast. Amy Pond once drank coffee for breakfast.

From tea, in-line format: this paragraph can be done two ways. One with specific in-line references (clearer refs but harder to read):
 * Tea was prominent in British culture and often drank for comfort. (TV: The Christmas Invasion, The Time Warrior, The Invasion) Rose Tyler considered tea "the solution to everything" and said that her mum would not go to bed until she had a cup of tea, with two sugars. (TV: The Christmas Invasion, Rise of the Cybermen) According to Mickey Smith, drinking tea while the world was coming to an end was "very British".(TV: The Christmas Invasion)

and one with references dumped at the end of the paragraph (easier to read but murkier refs):
 * Tea was prominent in British culture and often drank for comfort. Rose Tyler considered tea "the solution to everything" and said that her mum would not go to bed until she had a cup of tea, with two sugars. According to Mickey Smith, drinking tea while the world was coming to an end was "very British".(TV: The Christmas Invasion, The Time Warrior, The Invasion, Rise of the Cybermen)

From tea, reference format:
 * Tea was prominent in British culture and often drank for comfort.  Rose Tyler considered tea "the solution to everything" and said that her mum would not go to bed until she had a cup of tea, with two sugars. According to Mickey Smith, drinking tea while the world was coming to an end was "very British".