User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-27280472-20161218234727/@comment-27280472-20161219025413

User:SOTO/Forum Archive/The Panopticon/@comment-27280472-20161218234727/@comment-27280472-20161219025413 Here's the page: Terra Incognita (novel). If you don't mind, could you check over it and make sure I did it right?