The Mad Woman in the Attic (TV story)

Synopsis
The year is 2059. In the derelict attic of 13, Bannerman Road, an elderly Rani Chandra tells the story of the day she met the alien Eve, and her life went wrong.

Part One
In the year 2059, a young boy called Adam walks inside the dark, mysterious 13 Bannerman Road. It is no longer inhabited by Sarah Jane Smith, but instead by a self-described "mad old woman," Rani Chandra. Mr Smith has died and the whole house seems to be deteriorating; Rani herself is unkempt and unwell, and lingers over old photographs and drawings as she tells Adam how she came to this sorry state.

In 2010, Rani is intrigued by reports of strange lights, and goes over to Sarah Jane's to discuss them. There, Sarah Jane, Luke and Clyde are laughing about Maria Jackson, who is now hiding aliens from the American government. Sarah Jane says that the strange lights were just lightning, as Mr Smith had already checked up on it. Hurt by Sarah Jane's dismissive attitude, Rani returns home to sulk and finds an e-mail from Sam Lloyd, her best friend before she moved to Ealing. Sam is an orphan who dropped out of contact with Rani, even though she confided in him about her adventures with Sarah Jane.

Rani meets Sam, who tells her that there is a "demon" inside a closed funfair and people have disappeared. Rani goes in to investigate, but Sam returns to the orphanage. Rani finds the caretaker, Harry and pretends she has a twisted ankle in order to get into his office. While there, Rani hears a voice says 'Playtime has Begun'. She then witnesses the people who disappeared walk out from the haunted house and begin playing on the rides; all of their eyes have turned red and they smile fixedly while the rides appear to operate themselves. While Rani observes the people on the rides, Harry is contacted by a red face in his mirror. The voice says, 'Playtime is Over' and the people return to the haunted house.

Rani makes her way into the haunted house and discovers a red-skinned alien called Eve. Eve is just a child, and the two talk with each other; during the conversation, Sarah Jane tries to call Rani, and she mutters to herself that she wishes they'd just leave her alone. Eve reveals that her race can allow people to see their past and future and manipulate timelines, and were thus killed off in a conflict between two other races--most likely the Time War. Eve's parents placed her in a Ship that crashed on Earth, where Harry found her and has raised her ever since, hidden in the fair.

Eve then says that the people she possessed are her friends, as she is not allowed to go outdoors because of her inhuman appearance. Eve asks Rani if she wants to see her future. Rani sees her old, insane self and violently denies that such a thing could happen to her. She also decides to help Eve escape.

Part Two
Meanwhile, Clyde investigates into Rani's disappearance and finds Sam's e-mail. Sarah Jane, Luke and Clyde go to the orphanage home and Sam tells them where Rani is. Sarah Jane and Clyde leave to find Rani, while Luke stays behind with Sam, who also communicates with the red face via a mirror in his room. Sarah Jane and Clyde find Harry, and they also see the face in the mirror. The face scans Sarah Jane's mind and shows her past, as well as a glimpse of her future: the TARDIS in her attic. Sam captures Luke and the face does the same to him, showing him as a university graduate.

The face eventually reveals herself to be Ship, the computer system that drives Eve's ship, which was programmed to protect Eve until she was fully grown. Sarah Jane and Clyde go to find Eve, who is escaping with Rani, and though they argue Rani insists on taking Even outside. Eve is thrilled to see the outside world, but soon her ability to manipulate people and rides goes out of control: she sends her "friends" out for "playtime" and causes the rides to spin wildly. When Rani gets angry at her and storms off, Eve possesses her as well, causing her eyes to turn red. But soon Eve beguns to double over in pain, and Ship explains that Eve is dying: she is too young to control her powers and must be brought back to Ship for treatment.

Sam arrives at the funfair, and helps Sarah Jane and Clyde to locate Ship and get Eve on board. Ship is able to absorb Eve's excess energy, saving her life and returning Rani and the others to themselves. Rani and Harry also board Ship, and Eve invies Sam and Harry to come travel the stars with her. As the only thing that can power Ship is a black hole, Sarah Jane asks K-9 to bring one to them, which allows him to come home for good.

As Rani and her friends prepare to leave, Ship stops her and offers to grant Rani a wish. As she had previously said she wished Clyde, Luke and Sarah Jane would leave her alone, Ship erases them from existence; before Rani can ask for them back, Ship leaves, taking Eve, Sam and Harry with it.

Back in 2059, Rani has finished her tale, but sees Adam's eyes glow red. He explains that he is the son of Eve and Sam and that he has come here to grant her a wish. She wishes Ship never took her friends away and Adam attempts to correct it.

The scene on the ship repeats, but this time, Ship keeps quiet and doesn't erase anyone. Ship takes off happily with Eve, Sam and Harry, onwards to more adventure. Sarah Jane, Rani and Clyde are joined by Luke, and find K-9 at Sarah Jane's house when they return there. Sarah Jane takes a photo of Rani, Luke, Clyde and K-9.

In 2059, Rani is now living a very different life. She stills inhabits Bannerman Road, but appears healthy and sane, and the house is clean and well-lit. Her three grandchildren rush into the attic to hug her, followed by their father, Shuresh, who asks her how her trip to Washington, D.C. was. She says it was great and she and Luke got to catch up with Maria. The photo of Rani with Luke, Clyde and K-9 is visible on a shelf.

Cast

 * Sarah Jane Smith - Elisabeth Sladen
 * Luke Smith - Tommy Knight
 * Clyde Langer - Daniel Anthony
 * Rani Chandra - Anjli Mohindra
 * Voice of Mr Smith - Alexander Armstrong
 * Voice of K9 - John Leeson
 * Eve - Eleanor Tomlinson
 * Older Rani - Souad Faress
 * Harry - Brian Miller
 * Adam - Gregg Sulkin
 * Samuel Lloyd - Toby Parkes
 * Shuresh - Raj Rajani
 * Ship - Kate Fleetwood
 * The Doctor - Jon Pertwee (uncredited, stock footage)
 * The Doctor - Tom Baker (uncredited, stock footage)
 * The Doctor - David Tennant (uncredited)

Production Crew
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Story Notes

 * Harry was played by Brian Miller, Elisabeth Sladen's husband. Miller previously appeared in Doctor Who, in DW: Snakedance and voiced Daleks in DW: Resurrection of the Daleks, DW: Remembrance of the Daleks
 * The fact that Rani mentions the Daleks and Cybermen being part of the reason people are very aware of aliens may hint that the government ended the cover-up story mentioned in Torchwood at some point following the events of the DW: The Stolen Earth / Journey's End.
 * The clip of DW: The Five Doctors marks the first time footage from the classic series had appeared on one of the spin-off series, though the first overall "revival era" story to use such clips had been DW: The Next Doctor.

Ratings
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Myths

 * Since Eve said about playing games in the trailer, some people thought she was related to the Celestial Toymaker or the Isolus.
 * People thought another fairytale creature might be shown (such as the Pied Piper or Gorgon) because that was the normal format.
 * People thought Sarah Jane would be classified as mad and Luke will have to live in a home.

Filming Locations

 * Barry Island

Discontinuity, Plot Holes, Errors

 * When Eve scans Rani's mind a Gorgon appears: the Gorgon appeared in series 1, but Rani appeared in series 2. (This is a memory of aliens shown earlier in the episode not when looking at Rani's past.)
 * How can Rani narrate events which she is not a part of? She could not have found out from Sarah Jane, Luke or Clyde later on because they had been removed from time. (The only events she is actively shown to be narrating are ones of which she was a part, or which occurred while she, Luke, and Sarah were all connected to Ship.)
 * Clips of DW: The Five Doctors is shown but Sarah was supposed to have forgotten about that adventure (It is unknown whether she remembers being abducted to Gallifrey or not. Regardless, the clip is of her prior to that, on Earth talking to K9MKIII.)
 * Why did Ship show Rani her far future and not Luke and Sarah's far future? (Ship showed Rani the biggest effect in her future and the biggest effect in Sarah Janes and Lukes.)
 * How can Ship show Sarah Jane and Luke their futures if it removes them in that timeline? Because it hadn't done it yet, obviously. It shows them their most likely futures provided that they have futures.
 * When Sarah-Jane remembers the future Ship showed her at the end, when you see the Doctor's face it's like when the Doctor is in the TARDIS in the next episode, but not the part that it shows. (From the dialogue, it appears that Ship showed her more of the future than just the brief snippet we see.)

Continuity

 * Images of the Bane, Slitheen, The Trickster, Captain Tybo, and Kaagh are seen when Eve views Rani's thoughts.
 * Visions of Sarah-Jane's past include clips from DW: The Time Warrior (her first story), DW: Planet of the Spiders, DW: The Hand of Fear (her last regular classic story), DW: The Five Doctors, DW, The Stolen Earth / Journey's End
 * Clips from SJA: Invasion of the Bane, SJA: The Day of the Clown, SJA: The Temptation of Sarah Jane Smith and the next story The Wedding of Sarah Jane Smith
 * K-9 appears for the first time since SJA: From Raxacoricofallapatorius With Love. This marks his first appearance in Series Three.
 * The Daleks and Cybermen are mentioned, they came into common Earth knowledge as a whole during the events of DW: Doomsday, the Daleks also appear in a flashback of DW: The Stolen Earth